<p>The last few days I have been experimenting with
<a href="http://www.open-mesh.org/projects/batman-adv/wiki">the
-batman-adv mech technology</a>. I want to gain some experience to see
+batman-adv mesh technology</a>. I want to gain some experience to see
if it will fit <a href="https://wiki.debian.org/FreedomBox">the
Freedombox project</a>, and together with my neighbors try to build a
mesh network around the park where I live. Batman-adv is a layer 2
connected to my production network, one Raspberry Pi node on the 1th
floor that can be seen by my neighbor across the park, and one
play-node I use to develop the image building script. And some times
-I hook up work horse laptop to the mesh to test it. I look forward to
-figuring out what kind of latency the batman-adv setup will give, and
-how much packet loss we will experience around the park. :)</p>
+I hook up my work horse laptop to the mesh to test it. I look forward
+to figuring out what kind of latency the batman-adv setup will give,
+and how much packet loss we will experience around the park. :)</p>