Correct language.

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 Title: A fist full of non-anonymous Bitcoins
-Tags: english, bitcoin
+Tags: english, bitcoin, personvern, sikkerhet, usenix
 Date: 2014-01-29 14:10
 
 <p>Bitcoin is a incredible use of peer to peer communication and
 encryption, allowing direct and immediate money transfer without any
 central control.  It is sometimes claimed to be ideal for illegal
-activity, which I believe is quite a long way from the truth.  At last
+activity, which I believe is quite a long way from the truth.  At least
 I would not conduct illegal money transfers using a system where the
-details of every transaction is kept forever.  This point is
-investigated in an peer reviewed article in USENIX ;login: from
-December 2013, in the article
+details of every transaction are kept forever.  This point is
+investigated in
+<a href="https://www.usenix.org/publications/login">USENIX ;login:</a>
+from December 2013, in the article
 "<a href="https://www.usenix.org/system/files/login/articles/03_meiklejohn-online.pdf">A
 Fistful of Bitcoins - Characterizing Payments Among Men with No
 Names</a>" by Sarah Meiklejohn, Marjori Pomarole,Grant Jordan, Kirill
@@ -75,6 +76,6 @@ is anonymous.  It isn't really a good fit for illegal activites.  Use
 cash if you need to stay anonymous, at least until regular DNA
 sampling of notes and coins become the norm. :)</p>
 
-<p>As usual, if you use bitcoin and want to show your support of my
+<p>As usual, if you use Bitcoin and want to show your support of my
 activities, please send Bitcoin donations to my address
 <b><a href="bitcoin:15oWEoG9dUPovwmUL9KWAnYRtNJEkP1u1b&label=PetterReinholdtsenBlog">15oWEoG9dUPovwmUL9KWAnYRtNJEkP1u1b</a></b>.</p>