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 Title: 12 years of outages - summarised by Stuart Kendrick
-Tags: english, nuug, standard
+Tags: english, nuug, standard, usenix
 Date: 2012-10-26 14:20
 
 <p>I work at the <a href="http://www.uio.no/">University of Oslo</a>
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ it every time.</p>
 article by <a href="http://www.skendric.com/">Stuart Kendrick</a> from
 Fred Hutchinson Cancer Research Center titled
 "<a href="https://www.usenix.org/publications/login/october-2012-volume-37-number-5/what-takes-us-down">What
-Takes Us Down</a>" (also
+Takes Us Down</a>" (longer version also
 <a href="http://www.skendric.com/problem/incident-analysis/2012-06-30/What-Takes-Us-Down.pdf">available
 from his own site</a>), where he report what he found when he
 processed the outage reports (both planned and unplanned) from the
@@ -28,10 +28,11 @@ etc etc.  The article is a good read to get some empirical data on
 what kind of problems affect a data centre, but what really inspired
 me was the kind of reporting they had put in place since 2000.<p>
 
-<p>The centre set up a mailing list, and send fairly standardised
-messages to this list when a outage was planned or when it already
-occurred.  Here is the two example from the article: First the
-unplanned outage:
+<p>The centre set up a mailing list, and started to send fairly
+standardised messages to this list when a outage was planned or when
+it already occurred, to announce the plan and get feedback on the
+assumtions on scope and user impact.  Here is the two example from the
+article: First the unplanned outage:
 
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